Very often, we receive essays to review which are perceived by student-authors, parent reviewers and/or other reviewers as fabulous works of art on paper. Contrary to these perceptions, the essay sounds one-dimensional, colorless, prosaic, bland, a-cultural, homogenous and arrhythmic. Words such as “amazing”, “awesome”, “passionate” and “exciting” are often used yet they have no emotional connectivity and are phonetically detached. Beyond its basic structure, the college essay, like a great song, should be memorable, have depth and have universal appeal while portraying the applicant’s unmatched characteristics in a positive, stimulating and enlightening manner.” – Dr. Paul Lowe Continue Reading →